Where Have All The Heroes Gone: Forum

[Paragon Avenger]

Flower Knight,
Flower Night,
Flour Knight,
dare I introduce ...
Flour Night

[Paragon Avenger]

Up in the sky, it's a bird, it's a plane, no, it's Flour Night.
The savior of our city.
Able to dust bad guys with a single fling.
Able to sift through (something or another)
It's ...

FLOUR NIGHT!!!

(ok, just no.)

[Paragon Avenger]

With #5 about half-baked, I mean half-done;
It's time to start thinking about number 6.

• I could ...
  
  
  • All new cast of characters
  • Step outside the keeping everything pre-shut-down
• Just continue like the first 5, but with more Kolissa

[Paragon Avenger]

So it's settled, Necrophillia and Super Fire Dragon will get married.
Did I just give away a plot point?
I meant Totally Awesome Dude and Umbral Schrumbral will duel to the death.

[Paragon Avenger]

What might be funny:
Not Another Hero and Wong Tong Suey try to carry on a conversation.
It would read like "Huck Finn"!

[Paragon Avenger]

Flower Knight,
Flower Night,
Flour Knight,
dare I introduce ...
Flour Night

After they changed the tutorial, to be nothing like the rest of the game, they ignored Flower Knight.
Sometimes you would see her in Ouroborus, but that was it.
That would have been interesting if they gave the Statesman task force to her.
More probable would have been to give STF to Ms. Liberty, as they did, and make Flower Knight the trainer in Atlas.

They had Ms. Liberty in three places at once, and that's just not right.

[Paragon Avenger]

Wow, a quick in my head after two beers calculations puts the number of views of all the "Where Have All The Heroes Gone" series, including the forum at over 10,000.
That's 10,000 people have read my fan fiction without a single complaint.
I'm honored.
And that is why I have one blue star.

[Paragon Avenger]

Wow, a quick in my head after two beers calculations puts the number of views of all the "Where Have All The Heroes Gone" series, including the forum at over 10,000.
That's 10,000 people have read my fan fiction without a single complaint.

Remind me to buy a calculator.

[Paragon Avenger]

So which do you prefer.
A few long posts infrequent
or several short posts like every day
or a long dry spell?

I haven't written nothing in a while because I got a virtual bag of flaming dog droppings.
I really really hate malware right now.

[Paragon Avenger]

Every once in a while, I like to re-visit some of the old stories and add some commentery.

[Paragon Avenger]

So Gold Side is headed toward incarnate trials.
Anybody remember the finer details of those?
No?
Good, I can make [grapefruit] up.

[Paragon Avenger]

A friend of mine thinks that people just wander into my fan fiction, thinking, "I wonder what this is?", and then they don't come back.
What a noob!

[Paragon Avenger]

Ok, here's the deal.
It's only fair to tell you what's going on.
My fan fiction Gold Side is starting to sound like a cross between Red Side and Task Force.
So I'm casually trying to think of some idea to make Gold Side stand on it's own.
I have some ideas perculating, but nobody uses perculators anymore, espacially when you have a starbucks gift card, am I right or am I right.

Ok, I thought about bringing in No-No-Bad-Kitty.
No-No-Bad-Kitty is a fun-loving good-times cat-man character created by a friend of mine.
Really I only have one joke about No-No-Bad-Kitty and it's mildly amusing.

I thought about introducing love and romance into the story.  I'm thinking that Hero Commander and Kolissa might have something going on.  That love stuff doesn't fit the story.

I guess I need to continue to write your dose of CoH.  There are several aspects of the game I haven't fully explored yet.

I'm thinking that a detailed account of a battle might be a bit boring ...
"Super Fire Dragon used his breath of fire on the escaping prisoner.  The Escaping Prisoner said, "Ouch!"  Kolissa used confusion on a group of escaping prisoners.  The hold didn't work.  Super Spine Wolf fired poisoned spines into a group of escaping prisoners.  Necrophillia sent her zombies after some escaping prisoners.
Yeah, pretty boring stuff, well maybe the way I tell it.

I know, a cheese fight.

[Paragon Avenger]

Ok, ok, no cheese fight.  Boy, my fans can be insistant.

[Paragon Avenger]

https://i.imgur.com/4CoNKIQ.png

[Paragon Avenger]

I don't think that I want to play Monopoly with Kolissa.

[Paragon Avenger]

Yes, I stole another story.  It was supposed to be a telephone chat, but the posts were too few and far apart.
Now it is a side story about Super Fire Dragon, who else right.
So the premise is that there is a low-level agent hero for whom SFD is a mentor.
SFD sends him missions and such, like a CoX contact.
Ms. Liberty is the dragon's superior.  Ms. Liberty runs everything now.
Like my first story, he does not have a name.
This one is going to be short, sort of an outlet for the precision I feel sometimes from Gold Side.
Write five short stories about the same thing and you will probably understand.

[Paragon Avenger]

Ok, so the question is, (in the telephone call story).
Is he a bad guy or a good guy.
Show of hands.

[Paragon Avenger]

"Paragon Avenger's writting seems stilted and out of touch with the common man."  --Critic A.
"Paragon Avenger should give up writing, and go into shoe sales."   -                    --Critic B.
"After reading 'Where Have All The Heroes Gone' I want to gauge out my own eyes."  --Critic C.


Critics are raving about 'Where Have All The Heroes Gone' series.

[Paragon Avenger]

I almost had a professional writer look at this series and give it a big thumbs up, but that writer graciously and politely said that she was too busy.

This must mean that once you start reading "Where Have All The Heroes Gone" you can't put it down.  And to think, you get me for free.