The Adventures of Bruno Switchblade: Forum

[Paragon Avenger]

I like the addition of graphics.  The story, IMHO, lacks well ... Kolissa.
But besides that, nice effort.

[Stealth Dart]

Thanks Paragon Avenger.   ;D

[Paragon Avenger]

I would be happy to give you pointers, but any long stick would probably work just as well.

[Paragon Avenger]

I would be happy to give you pointers, but any long stick would probably work just as well.

Get it 'pointers' as in a pointer like a teacher might use to draw ones attention to a part of a map, chart, or other visual aid.