Hmm, watched the video you linked.
It would seem you don't have the best computer graphics wise. Your video editing skills are not the best and I have never heard of the software you recorded with.
But don't take any of that the wrong way I am a perfectionist so if I make a video it must look like a pro made it or I will not be happy.
Anyway if you need any editing/recording help/advice feel free to hit me up.