Celtic Lass? Superb! I suggest the "fail" at the end might be gilding the lily, but I'll leave that for others to comment on.
JR, don't be so ashamed of primal things. They too must be served, carefully. I myself go all fanboy over the Furies up there. I'd advise you to go take an axe brute into Sharkshead, but....
"When people consign too much to the subconscious, that unrecognized, unheeded demon must come roaring back out into the light."
-- Joseph Campbell, regarding the Jungian "Shadow-self."