Very, very good! The article itself was cogent and well-written, as expected.
More importantly, am I understanding correctly, this will be printed in Hangul and read in Korea? Finally!
Korean investors will see NCSoft as a bad risk. Our fellow gamers in the East will have a red flag up. The people of Korea will see this as a bad emissary of their culture and values.
So long as we were confined to English, NCSoft was safe. Finally, we have attacked on their home turf, cost them money and prestige where they live. Congratulations due for this "Doolittle Raid."
I see some minor typos. Should I bring them up? Perhaps this will be irrelevant because the whole thing shall be translated.